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Post by James_Klause ♥ on May 19, 2007 12:34:26 GMT -5
I gave it a go, but it didn't turn out brilliant [lol] So I warn you now ;] Anyway, please comment. Tell me what I can do better && such.
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Post by Rehy on May 19, 2007 13:12:59 GMT -5
IT's good for a first. Here is my critique.
You render needs to have less edges choppy edges, try making it less choppy. Secondly, blend your render more into the background. The text is nice though a bit big. The little heart at the left corner is a nice touch more. But it is still good for a beginner.
First Sig Rating: 6/10
Normal Rating: 3.5/10
You have a lot of potential, keep up the good work!
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Post by James_Klause ♥ on May 20, 2007 2:28:43 GMT -5
Thanks for the comment/rating ;]
I'll do better next time  |
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Post by Rehy on May 20, 2007 9:28:21 GMT -5
okay. |
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Post by wowposter on Sept 28, 2008 11:29:47 GMT -5
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Post by wowposter on Oct 4, 2008 9:00:56 GMT -5
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Post by wowposter on Oct 5, 2008 16:40:54 GMT -5
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